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In the second known draft, dated October 22, 2795, raised even more concerns over the personnel roster. Specifically the inclusion of 48 purpose-built 3rd generation Mjölnir Mk VII-IX and Sharur Mk 2-6 [[Cyborg|cyborgs]].<ref name = ""progodraft3">[https://www.marathonwiki.com/File:UESC_TSdocu_PROGO_memo_B95_DraftE.pdf Marathon (202X) ARG, Project_Goliath_DRAFT_E]</ref> The commentary noted that cyborgs at the time of the ''Marathon's'' launch were dedicated weapons of war, and that sending any cyborg would be seen as an act of aggression.  
In the second known draft, dated October 22, 2795, raised even more concerns over the personnel roster. Specifically the inclusion of 48 purpose-built 3rd generation Mjölnir Mk VII-IX and Sharur Mk 2-6 [[Cyborg|cyborgs]].<ref name = ""progodraft3">[https://www.marathonwiki.com/File:UESC_TSdocu_PROGO_memo_B95_DraftE.pdf Marathon (202X) ARG, Project_Goliath_DRAFT_E]</ref> The commentary noted that cyborgs at the time of the ''Marathon's'' launch were dedicated weapons of war, and that sending any cyborg would be seen as an act of aggression.  


These concerns were also raised in an email chain between two unknown parties. These concerns over the rapid militarization of Project Goliath by [[Mx Moreau]] were raised.<ref name = "email chain">[https://www.marathonwiki.com/File:UESC_docu_PROGO_digicorr_23072795.pdf Marathon (202X) ARG, Email Chain]</ref> In some drafts, the number of craft included in the mission reached as high as 14. Some of these ships as well, were specifically designed for orbital bombardment. Later drafts would see the cyborgs replaced by military clones and other military personnel reduced significantly.  
These same concerns were also raised in an email chain between two unknown parties, regarding the project's rapid militarization by [[Mx Moreau]].<ref name = "email chain">[https://www.marathonwiki.com/File:UESC_docu_PROGO_digicorr_23072795.pdf Marathon (202X) ARG, Email Chain]</ref> In some drafts, the number of craft included in the mission reached as high as 14. Some of these ships as well, were specifically designed for orbital bombardment. Later drafts would see the cyborgs replaced by military clones and other military personnel reduced significantly.  


==== Final Iteration ====
==== Final Iteration ====
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== Notes ==
== Notes ==


*Though there are only 3 drafts with actual text released, there are references to many others, and a draft H that have not been released as of yet. <ref name = "email chain">[https://www.marathonwiki.com/File:UESC_docu_PROGO_digicorr_23072795.pdf Marathon (202X) ARG, Email Chain]</ref>
*Though there are only 3 drafts with actual text released, there are references to many others. A draft H is one of these drafts, but it has not been released as of yet. <ref name = "email chain">[https://www.marathonwiki.com/File:UESC_docu_PROGO_digicorr_23072795.pdf Marathon (202X) ARG, Email Chain]</ref>